Sunday 8 July 2012

hello

Hello everyone, this is progress of image so far, but I', trying to rethink it. I feel it can be much better then it is so I want to just completely re due it.


I am thinking of something maybe more like this, I want it to be more of an environment to, and I don't want to composition to be centered.
 


 Still lifes, trying to get better at reflective surfaces, they are very hard, and the cloth is killing me too haha!






 Some photo studies, the cars are to study reflective surfaces and I thought the colors on this other photo were good.



1 comment:

  1. I would say don't change the composition to that other one. I think you just need to work on her pose: it looks pretty rough and I think it will look better with some ref and bring everything together. Then maybe extend the frame up a bit to show more of the tubes and wires and stuff.
    The second comp has too much boring nothing going on in the bg.

    Nothing wrong with centered compositions!

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