Hello everyone, this is progress of image so far, but I', trying to rethink it. I feel it can be much better then it is so I want to just completely re due it.
I am thinking of something maybe more like this, I want it to be more of an environment to, and I don't want to composition to be centered.
Some photo studies, the cars are to study reflective surfaces and I thought the colors on this other photo were good.
I would say don't change the composition to that other one. I think you just need to work on her pose: it looks pretty rough and I think it will look better with some ref and bring everything together. Then maybe extend the frame up a bit to show more of the tubes and wires and stuff.
ReplyDeleteThe second comp has too much boring nothing going on in the bg.
Nothing wrong with centered compositions!